So without further ado:
What You Don't Know About Halloween
By Clara
Witches come and witches go,
The pale white ghosts begin to glow.
The scared children begin to shake,
Goblins gather at every gate.
The monster's evil, the light is poor,
Vampires enter at every door.
Darkness looms within the air,
Not an hour it can spare.
Jack-o-lanterns begin to eye,
Everything wih no surprise.
Then dawn breaks and begins to pry,
Open the darkness, and blue comes alive.
And every ghost just fades away.
And every ghoul rests their play.
As a bright blue guard begins to build,
And all the children, no longer chilled.
That is FANTASTIC! Congratulation her for us.
ReplyDeleteWhat are you going as this year?
wow. congrats to your daughter, very well done! love the transition into day...happy TT!
ReplyDeleteIt'll be the Nobel for sure.
ReplyDeleteShe's brilliant, of course! Runs in the family. Seriously, give her a big hug and a kiss for me.
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome!!! Really!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow! Methinks she got mommy's talent! Thanks for sharing that, and Happy TT!
ReplyDeleteHey, I'm very impressed! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is awesome!Brillant!
ReplyDeleteReally wonderful. It seems that she has talent. And it's good idea when children write such poems. They could be used then as a decoration on the front door and everybody who's going to enter can read them.
ReplyDeleteHappy Halloween,
Ella
What a great poem. Your daughter has some real talent.
ReplyDeleteFun poem! Happy Halloween!
ReplyDeleteThat last stanza is brilliant.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! What is she dressing up as this year?
ReplyDeleteWell...that is QUITE GOOD! Enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem...thanks for sharing it and I hope your daughter continues writing.
ReplyDeleteThat is a really great poem! She's quite talented, I must say.
ReplyDeletePerfect TT post.
You are capturing the spirit with your daughter's poem. She captures it with her imagination. She is talented. How old is she?
ReplyDeleteClara did a wonderful job! Happy Halloween!
ReplyDelete"Chilled?" And "children" (pronounced "chilled-ren," of course)? What a delightful play on words!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to pass on these great comments to Clara - judiciously of course, I wouldn't want her to get a swelled head! For those who asked, she is 10 years old and will be a devil for Halloween. She's always a devil, I guess she likes red! Happy Halloween everyone!
ReplyDeleteThis is truly charming. Congratulations to your daughter on a poem that sums up halloween so perfectly.
ReplyDeleteVery well done! you must be proud.
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